Tuesday, 3 May 2011
Story: In-Flight Entertainment: Part One
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Macho Men forcibly transformed into Mincing Maidens
Macho Men forcibly transformed into Mincing Maidens
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I just read your story and I loved it so much I'd love to be Skye I hope you do a sequel.
Yup - it's only part one. Not sure how many parts it'll end running for but probably three.
I can't wait I loved it so much I read it again and spent awhile going through your captions, Your very talented and I am so glad I found your blog.
Glad you liked it. Did you find this blog via Fictionmania?
I did yea I'm glad I did.
hahah it was your story?? Brilliant!!!
I read it before I realized it was authored by you.
Well I loved it.. lovely descriptions and oh such an evil situation to be in yet why is it I'm so jealous of Skye (Ace)
Would love to see more of your work in future.. can't wait!!!
Tiffany XXX
http://crossdreamer.blogspot.com/
Oh! My! GOSH!
That's story is like a caption expanded(well, technically it is, right? Ms. Blue is not a stranger ;) ), it has everything that I love in your caps: the extensive descriptions of the torment the subject goes through, the increasing humiliation that just NEVER stops, the incredible meekness of the tortured subject... if it had illustrations, it'd be THE BOMB! XD
Hope you do more, but don't stop doing captions, dear! ;D
Thanks everyone.
Illustations will not be forthcoming... I can't draw for toffee :)
Hi Alyssa,
great work on amazing debut piece of fiction.
Leila-Stoat has said, much better than i could alot of what i think.
It does have the wit of your captions expanded into a new medium perfectly.
It has the uncomprising emasculating females of your captions and a balance between inventive and out there humiliations and 'believable' situations.
The description of Ace and constrast with Skye is one of the many factors that really makes the story so exciting.
The description of the hormone shots and the surgeries from his wife's new beau are thrilling.
The scenario where Skye is washing her former ferrari in a teeny bikini wow!
i was blown away by this story and can't wait for the next part but also love every time you post a caption
Oh wow ive been following this blog for a while and have recently read the inf light entertainment stories, I didnt realise that you wrote them until i came back to this site, it would be awesome if you could do a cap series of the story once its finished, Great writing btw. tyvm for the effort :D
I would love to see a story with the touch of class caption characters
You might get your wish with that one day :)
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